高考英语满分作文及点评汇总

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery.Now I’m writing to ly for the position.

The reasons for my lication are as follows.First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English.What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order.The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.I’d reciate it if you could take my lication into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

写作解析

这篇书面表达属于应用文中的申请信类型，可以按照申请信的思路来写，同时要注意电子邮件的写作需要体现交际性。

首先要进行自我介绍，简要交代写作背景，阐明写信目的。

第二段是文章的主题，要把题干给到的提示完整地体现出来，文章用First of all，What’s more, The most important factor is that 等过渡性结构自然地串联三个要点。同时要注意句式的多样化与高级词汇的应用。

最后需要使用求职信的常用套话及书信的常用套话结尾。

2.题目要求

假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括：

1.比赛信息；

2.赛前准备；

3.表达期待。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

满分优秀范文

Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I have good news to tell you.A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition.Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well.What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them.Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.

So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

写作指导

本题要求：作为排球队队长李华，给队友Chris写一封邮件告知他近期球队将参加比赛，主要的要点包含三项，分别是：比赛信息、赛前准备、表达期待。字数要求100左右，考生应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。作文的难度不大，可以灵活运用学过的高级短语和句型，例如定语从句；名词性从句；非谓语动词；倒装句等等。另外要注意衔接词汇的使用以使行文连贯；高级词汇的使用以提升作品的档次。

3.题目要求

假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：

1.时间；

2.活动安排；

3.欢迎他表演节目。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

优秀满分范文

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall.And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech.Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students.You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

点评

本文内容完整，详略得当。并使用了高级句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定语从句。提升了文章档次。

4.试题回顾

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:

1.交通出行；

2.必备衣物。

注意:

1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim，

_______

Yours,

Li Hua

优秀满分范文

Dear Jim,

I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.

I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.Tianjin will be your next stop.After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week.You can take high-speed trains to both cities.

Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.

Looking forward to your arrival.

Yours,

Li Hua

点评

本文内容完整，语言表述流畅。文章使用了几个高分句型。that you’re coming to tour in China.和that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around.是宾语从句。where you can stay for a week.是非限制性定语从句。

5.试题回顾

假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：

1.到达时间；

2.合适的礼物；

3.餐桌礼仪。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

满分作文

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.

Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture.Secondly, if I were you I would bring some ropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country.Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to.For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food.Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

6.试题回顾

你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：

1.短片内容：学校的发展；

2.放映时间、地点；

3.欢迎对短片提出意见。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

满分范文

Notice

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus.Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting.Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th .What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

Hopefully, you would make it to our activity.I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

The Student Union

7.试题回顾

假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：

1.学校的体育场馆；

2.主要的运动项目；

3.你喜欢的项目。

注意：

1.词数100左右：

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

满分范文

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school.Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua