高考英语读后续写必背:续写提分赋能16大经典句式
句式1:With+复合结构”又称为“with结构”
Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子,她就更加焦虑,心跳加速,脚出汗。
Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。
1.那女孩张大了嘴巴,打开了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+adj.open)
2.女孩心怦怦直跳(beatwildly),打开(unwrap)了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+分词)
3.他的妻子伤心极了,眼里满是泪水(fulloftears/filledwithtears)
4.那个人躺在地上,双手颤抖着。(ontheground,tremble)
Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithhermouthwideopen.
Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithherheartbeatingwildly.
Hiswifewasextremelysad,witheyesfulloftears/withtearsrollingdownherface
句式2:并列谓语,细化动作A,BandC
Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathandwalkedtothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时,朱迪深吸一口气,慢慢地走到起跑线上。
句式3:句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随,原因或结果
Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。
句式4巧用生动的无灵主语:Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.
描述心情的名词
happiness/joy/delight开心
anger/rage/fury狂怒
sadness/sorrow悲伤
gratitude/appreciation感激
admiration钦佩/赞赏
guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨
fear/terror/fright/panic害怕
astonishment/shock/surprise震惊
动词
seize
catch(caught过去式)
strike(struck过去式)
surround
takeholdof
washover
comeover
+sb.
句式5:情感形容词+句子
Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,helpiscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口气,向那个人表示感谢,并将频率调回,“麦克,救命来了!”但没有回应。
Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。
句式6:巧用时间状语,表达情节
Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!好像经历了一个世纪之后,埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了,是雪山救援队!
句式7:.“一……就……”的表达法:assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,themoment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。
Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.当播音员宣布“11号,JodieNymble,为RiversideMiddleSchool夺金”的那一刻,雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了HiddenPark.
句式8:巧用“某人想到”:
Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子,她就更加焦虑,心跳加速,脚出汗。
句式9:主句,which从句(定语从句)
格式:_______主句________,which第二句话;
例句:玛丽打开门看到了小女孩,她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair
结构2:格式:_______主句________,whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo;_______主句________,whichmade/forced/allowedsb感情词
例句:就在这时,我们听到了UnclePaul远处传来的微弱声音,这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。
Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,whichallowedustolightthehopereturninghome.
句式10:描写气氛或者氛围的句子。(情感词+fill+地点)
Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。
句式11:关于情感句子的积累:(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写),用so…that
Jodiewassoexcitedandrefreshedthatsheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常兴奋,神清气爽,她大叫“我的幸运钉”。
1.兴奋:Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我动得跳了起来
2.开心:Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高兴得上跑下跳
3.感动:IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感动得一句话也说不出来
4.悲伤:IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands我难受得用手捂住了脸。
5.(生气)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword我气得一句话也说不出。
6.(害怕)Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.
我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。
7.(羞愧)IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。
升级倒装
SoshockedwasIthatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(当我听到消息时候,我太震惊了以至于呆在原地)
句式12:副词修饰动词或句子
(1)Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。
(2)Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathandwalkedtothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时,朱迪深吸一口气,慢慢地走到起跑线上。
(3)Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。
句式13:倒装或强调
NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.直到那时,朱迪才意识到,只要她不遗余力地去做,运气总是会眷顾她。
呼应主题常用句式
直到...才....
(1)倒装句:notuntil+时间状语didsbrealizethat+主题从句
(2)强调句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主题从句
还记得某人的话,
某人的话还在脑海中
One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone’searsthat+主题
Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/beamofhope.
Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.
是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保持乐观的态度
Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.
正是爱让/使这个世界运转起来
Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedherconfidence.(她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心)
句式14独立主格结构
Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.
句式15名词性从句
主语从句
结构1:Itis+adjforsbthat…
结构2:whatIcoulddo/say/…isto
what(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat…=itisimportantthat…
Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>
功能:用于突出某个动作的重要或必须
应用位置:不限
例句1:我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。
Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.
例句2:我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。
WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.
句式16【毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事】
1、Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought
2、Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth
【例句】
1、在一个下雪的冬天早上,水冰冷刺骨,但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里,伸手去够我儿子。
Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.
2、我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。
Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.