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高考英语读后续写必背:续写提分赋能16大经典句式

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  句式1:With+复合结构”又称为“with结构”

  Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子,她就更加焦虑,心跳加速,脚出汗。

  Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。

  1.那女孩张大了嘴巴,打开了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+adj.open)

  2.女孩心怦怦直跳(beatwildly),打开(unwrap)了她的礼物盒。(with+宾语+分词)

  3.他的妻子伤心极了,眼里满是泪水(fulloftears/filledwithtears)

  4.那个人躺在地上,双手颤抖着。(ontheground,tremble)

  Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithhermouthwideopen.

  Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithherheartbeatingwildly.

  Hiswifewasextremelysad,witheyesfulloftears/withtearsrollingdownherface

  句式2:并列谓语,细化动作A,BandC

  Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathandwalkedtothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时,朱迪深吸一口气,慢慢地走到起跑线上。

  句式3:句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随,原因或结果

  Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

  句式4巧用生动的无灵主语:Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.

  描述心情的名词

  happiness/joy/delight开心

  anger/rage/fury狂怒

  sadness/sorrow悲伤

  gratitude/appreciation感激

  admiration钦佩/赞赏

  guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨

  fear/terror/fright/panic害怕

  astonishment/shock/surprise震惊

  动词

  seize

  catch(caught过去式)

  strike(struck过去式)

  surround

  takeholdof

  washover

  comeover

  +sb.

  句式5:情感形容词+句子

  Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,helpiscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口气,向那个人表示感谢,并将频率调回,“麦克,救命来了!”但没有回应。

  Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。

  句式6:巧用时间状语,表达情节

  Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinallycame!好像经历了一个世纪之后,埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了,是雪山救援队!

  句式7:.“一……就……”的表达法:assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,themoment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。

  Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.当播音员宣布“11号,JodieNymble,为RiversideMiddleSchool夺金”的那一刻,雷鸣般的欢呼和笑声充满了HiddenPark.

  句式8:巧用“某人想到”:

  Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeatingfastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子,她就更加焦虑,心跳加速,脚出汗。

  句式9:主句,which从句(定语从句)

  格式:_______主句________,which第二句话;

  例句:玛丽打开门看到了小女孩,她有着令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的头发Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair

  结构2:格式:_______主句________,whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo;_______主句________,whichmade/forced/allowedsb感情词

  例句:就在这时,我们听到了UnclePaul远处传来的微弱声音,这重新点燃了我们回家的希望。

  Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,whichallowedustolightthehopereturninghome.

  句式10:描写气氛或者氛围的句子。(情感词+fill+地点)

  Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。

  句式11:关于情感句子的积累:(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写),用so…that

  Jodiewassoexcitedandrefreshedthatsheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常兴奋,神清气爽,她大叫“我的幸运钉”。

  1.兴奋:Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我动得跳了起来

  2.开心:Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高兴得上跑下跳

  3.感动:IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感动得一句话也说不出来

  4.悲伤:IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands我难受得用手捂住了脸。

  5.(生气)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword我气得一句话也说不出。

  6.(害怕)Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.

  我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。

  7.(羞愧)IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。

  升级倒装

  SoshockedwasIthatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(当我听到消息时候,我太震惊了以至于呆在原地)

  句式12:副词修饰动词或句子

  (1)Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿着她崭新的钉子,紧张不安地等待着轮到她。

  (2)Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathandwalkedtothestartinglineslowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时,朱迪深吸一口气,慢慢地走到起跑线上。

  (3)Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激动而高兴,紧紧地拥抱着队友,泪水从脸上滑落。

  句式13:倒装或强调

  NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.直到那时,朱迪才意识到,只要她不遗余力地去做,运气总是会眷顾她。

  呼应主题常用句式

  直到...才....

  (1)倒装句:notuntil+时间状语didsbrealizethat+主题从句

  (2)强调句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主题从句

  还记得某人的话,

  某人的话还在脑海中

  One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone’searsthat+主题

  Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/beamofhope.

  Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.

  是我的妈妈一直教导我们要对困难保持乐观的态度

  Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.

  正是爱让/使这个世界运转起来

  Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedherconfidence.(她说正是我的陪伴和鼓励不仅使我快乐而且提高了我的信心)

  句式14独立主格结构

  Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

  句式15名词性从句

  主语从句

  结构1:Itis+adjforsbthat…

  结构2:whatIcoulddo/say/…isto

  what(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat…=itisimportantthat…

  Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>

  功能:用于突出某个动作的重要或必须

  应用位置:不限

  例句1:我们能做的就是慢慢沿着原路回去。

  Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

  例句2:我所看到的与我过去所经历的任何事情完全不同。

  WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.

  句式16【毫不犹豫/迫不及待做某事】

  1、Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought

  2、Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth

  【例句】

  1、在一个下雪的冬天早上,水冰冷刺骨,但那个年轻人毫不犹豫/迟疑地跳进水里,伸手去够我儿子。

  Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.

  2、我迫不及待地想把这个好消息告诉妈妈。

  Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.